Interactive Banner...Feedback!

Today we showed our interactive banners and the main feedback that I gained from this was that we needed to show our design ideas and VARIATION of ideas. It was also suggested that our banner should advertise an actual event and provide a link to a website. Therefore I think text should be added to the first frame reading ‘Forest Fields Fireworks’ and then the last frame should have an arrow under the text which will link to the forest firework information website.